Wednesday, October 27, 2010

HORROR STORY

 We have written this story with the help of all class. It is a colaborative story, each couple has written one paragraph and sent to the next couple. If you want to read the original document you can do it in google docs clicking here

Bad friends
       It was raining in the mountain. Mary was lost. She started walking down the mountain trying to find the road. Suddenly she stumbled and she fell down. She looked back and she shouted very strongly, there was a hand out of the ground. She dug the mud and she recognized the body, he was her husband. She started crying and she went to ask for help.

       She went running to the road to go from there to one town that was one kilometer away. She was very scared so she started running. When she arrived at the town there wasn't anybody in the street, except for one old woman. She went to the woman because she didn’t know where the nearest police station was. The old woman told her that there wasn't any station in the town. She couldn't believe what was happening, her husband was dead and she didn’t know where she was. She started walking around the town and she found a phone box. Mary was very frightened and she couldn't dial the numbers but she made an effort. She phoned to the police but no one answered the phone. The light had gone. Mary couldn’t phone anybody so she returned crying to the old woman. The woman was a very good person and Mary decided to tell her what had happened. The old woman understood Mary and she put her up in her house. Next day came the light an Mary phoned the police. The police and Mary met in the old woman’s house. The police asked some things and then the police started investigating.
       The next morning, they went to the mountain where Mary had found her husband’s body and they found a clue of the murderer: They found a wallet. There they found an Identity Card and they saw that the man who assassinated Mary’s husband was Mr. Smith which was her previous husband whose divorce she got last year. They went to the police station and they talked to the police chief. The police continue investigating about the murder. They went to Mr smith’s house but he wasn't there. So they waited until the next day. It was a very cold day and it was snowing. Mary and the police went again to Mr smith’s house. They knocked on the door but he didn't answer. The police saw Mr smith going out of the window. The police went behind him but he went to the car and the police couldn’t catch him. The next day Mary saw Mr. Smith in the park with her daughter. Mary picked up a stick from the floor and went to hit him. Mary approached Mr smith and hit him very hardly.

       When she hit him, he was left unconscious. She scared and because of this she started running. She thought that she had killed him and so she went to a small and unknown town to don’t get caught by the police. There she found a very old house and she decided to hide there for a time. The house was very dark and it smelled very bad. In the door of the entrance it put “Adolf and Sara”, they were the owners of the house and the name produced a rare sensation to Mary, so she had to tread carefully. She started going upstairs and the stairs began to creak, so in any moment the stairs could fall.
       A week later, while she was watching television, someone knocked on the door of the house. When she opened, she saw that was her ex-husband, and she realized that she hadn’t killed him. She tought that he came to kill her but Mr Smith, told her that he was not the murderer of her husband and he knew who was. Her ex-husband told her that he discover the murderer of his husband. He said that after Mary hit him in the park, he went to her house to ask for an explanation. When he arrived to the house he heard her neighbour shouting. He turn on the phone and he started recording the conversation. He was saying to his friend that he was very proud for killing his neighbour and for incriminate to Mr. Smith. When he heard that he started finding Mary until today.

       Then Mary knew that her ex-husband was saying the true because she had the sensation that her neighbour was controlling her and her husband. They ran to the police station to show the proof. The police, Mary and Mr. Smith went to Mary’s neighbour’s house. When the neighbour heard the siren, he poked to the window and saw the police cars arriving. He tried to escape but he fell down of the window to the street and died. Since Mary died he lived alone, she didn’t go out her house for anything. She only went out her house to visited the tomb of her husband.

The End.

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